...们用英语把自己介绍给全班同学。请根据下列要点,用英语描述自_百度...
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Hello, class, it is an honor to introduce myself to everyone. I am XXX years old. I come from XXX City. I am a little fat, but honest and friendly. I study very hard and do well in all subjects. I can get along well with the classmates and I am always ready to help others. I am popular among the students. I have a great many hobbies, such as pop music and sports activities. I am good at playing basketball. What’s more, I will make up my mind to learn from everyone.
试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文，要求用英语把自己介绍给全班同学，文章的要点都已经给出了。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文有一些常见的短语和词组：do well in在…方面做的好，get along with相处，be ready to准备好的，be popular among sb受…欢迎，.be good at doing擅长，. make up one’s mind to do决定做…。还有一些句式：it is an honor to introduce myself to everyone.这是it做形式主语的句子，I can get along well with the classmates and I am always ready to help others. 这句话是并列句， What’s more,
