My View on Fake Commodities

My View on Fake Commodities 要求：

1假冒伪劣商品危害社会 2其影响波及很广 3谈谈自己的想法

My View on Fake Commodities

The prevalence of fake commodities has been a big problem in our society. Almost every day in newspapers we can find articles pertaining to fake commodities. Although measures have been adopted to deal with this problem, it still remains a serious threat.

Fake goods are harmful on many levels. First, fake goods can be dangerous to one’s health, as it did in the case of Sanlu milk powder which put thousands of infants to the verge of death. Secondly, many fake

commodities have been exported overseas, which has resulted in a poor reputation for goods coming out of China and has had a negative influence on exports. Additionally, those selling fake commodities to make a quick profit undermine the market rules, which will break economic system.

From what I said above, it is a must to take some approaches. Laws and regulations should be implemented to ban the manufacturing and distribution of fake goods. At the same time, consumers should be educated to enhance the awareness of self-protection. Only when we act together will fake goods become a thing of the past.

各位六级班的同们，这是我预测的第一篇文章，本文采取了BIP的写作模式。在主题段从3个方面论证，从个人-企业-国家，从小到大的逻辑来阐述假冒商品的危害。结尾从立法+教育的角度收尾。

祝同学们好运！