写作步步高之七 如何写好结尾句
结尾句常用短语有：As I have shown / said / stated„, As has been noted„,We can draw / come to /arrive at a conclusion„, To sum up, To conclude, Last but not least (最后但很重要) In conclusion, as has been stated, as is known to all, as you know, generally speaking, in general, on the whole. All in all, obviously, therefore, The result is dependent on „, from this point of view, In a word, In brief, In summary 等。 及时巩固
1. 从下框的句子中给下面几篇短文选择一个恰当的结尾句。
A. Let’s go in for sports. B. In a word, different people have different food tastes. C. That evening, we had a tasty meal of fish. D. Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile. E. Don’t you agree, boys and girls? ① We worked in the fields for a whole day. Evening came before we realized it. We put down farming tools and looked at each other.
__________________________________________________________________________ ② I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun.
___________________________________________________________________________ ③As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work better. A sound mind is in a sound body.
___________________________________________________________________________ ④Housework benefits us a lot. Everyone should learn to do housework.
___________________________________________________________________________ ⑤People have different tastes in food. Some feel that they haven’t eaten a meal unless they have had steak or other red meat. Some prefer chicken or fish and eat one or the other at every meal. Others prefer vegetables and fruit.
___________________________________________________________________________ 2. 下面有两篇文章，请选出较好的一篇，并分析原因。
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Paragraph A
“Practice makes perfect”is really a good saying. At the beginning of our summer vacation, my friends invited me to go swimming with them. I was embarrassed to tell them that I couldn’t swim. My best friend Jill told me that she would help teach me. Every day during the vacation for an hour or two, Jill slowly taught me how to swim. Before our classes began again, I could swim one time across the swimming pool. How happy I was! I now understand the true meaning of friendship. Paragraph B
Now I really understand what“Practice makes perfect”means. Half a year ago, I didn’t know how to swim. To be honest, I was even afraid of going into a swimming pool. My best friend Jill told me that she would be glad to teach me how to swim. Day after day during the summer vacation, Jill spent an hour or two with me every day, showing me how to swim. At the end of the summer vacation, I could swim once across the pool. I never felt so happy in my life! Now I realize that, if you want to succeed in anything, you must practice day after day until you are successful.
答案：_________________________________________________________________ 分析：_________________________________________________________________ 3. 请根据所给汉语完成以下常见的结尾句式。
① ____________________________________(如果能实践这些)，he will surely be able to live a happy life.
②______________________(如此)，I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me.
③_____________________(只有通力合作) can we expect our hometown to take on a new look in due course.
④___________________(最后但很重要)，the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to the problem.
⑤______________________(基于以上理由)，I think receiving college education in China is wise.
⑥___________________(总而言之)， a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. ⑦_________________(如果我们能做到上述)，there can be no doubt that „ ⑧__________________(从政治的观点来看)， it is a very complicated problem. ⑨ From what has been discussed above, we may safely ______________________„
(从以上的讨论我们可以肯定地得出结论，即„)
⑩____________________，we naturally come to the conclusion that„
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(把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论„„) 11__________________________„They also implied that„ ○
(这些故事表明„„它们也暗示了„„)
12___________________________ special attention must be paid to the problem of„ ○
(毫无疑问，需要对„„问题加以特殊关注)
13We need to ________________________ , otherwise ,we … ○
(对待这一问题，我们应该态度明确，不然我们……)
14The most effective means to solve this problem is ______________________ (尽可能多○的做练习).
15On the whole ,________________(的确是时候)we recongnized the significance of ○
giving up smoking.
16As a result ,we should take some effective methods to __________________(保证所有的○孩子不退学).
17______________________(不管你找什么理由)，the key point lies in here. ○
18From what has been discussed above,we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion_______ ○
_____________(每个人都应该遵守交通规则).
19There is no doubt that _______________________(我们都应该遵循社会的常规行为). ○
20_____________________(正如老话所说)，nothing can be accomplished without norms ○or standards.
1D ○2C ○3A ○4E ○5B 答案：1.○
1答案B篇 2.○
2分析：B篇首句与尾句之间形成了呼应关系，主题一致，首句确定主题，尾句进一 ○
步强调深化主题，而A篇首句与尾句主题不一致，一个强调“熟能生巧”，一个强调友谊的意义。
3.① If one can really put them (the above) into practice/action或By putting them (the above) into practice/action
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②In this way
③Only with combined effort ④Last but not least ⑤For these reasons
⑥To sum up / To conclude/ All in all/ In summary /In a word
⑦If we can do as mentioned above ⑧From the political point of view
⑨draw / arrive at /come to the conclusion that
⑩Taking all these factors into consideration/ acc count 11These stories suggested that ○
12There is no doubt that ○
13take clear attitude at the problem ○
14that we should do as many exercise as possible ○
15it is high time that ○
16make sure that there isn’t a single child dropping out ○
17Whatever reasons you try to find ○
18that everyone should obey traffic rules ○
19we all should follow normal behavior in our society ○
20As an old saying goes ○
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